Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, June 10, 2020
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ReplyDeleteWhy did you delete this comment????
DeleteI did the same comment 2 times!
DeleteWow, I need to ask my Mum to go and buy some! I am a slow runner so I will have to try them. I need to tell you a story, at my holiday program It was fear factor food challenge I had to eat Brussel sprouts covered in Icing! It was horrible! But I might need to try Brussel sprouts and butter!
ReplyDeleteHi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing slide!
You are obviously very creative and I love the photos you added. In fact I think I might eat some Brussel sprouts tonight!
-Clara
Ewwww,
ReplyDeleteHi Charlotte,
I think I am fast enough how I am but...
If I was slow I would do that but I would have to eat loads of chocolate after. Well done adding facts to make your piece more convincing.
Next time you could add a little more writing and less slides.
Isla
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteThose were some great facts. I would never do that because I hate brussel sprouts. Next time you could add more writing
Isla